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Re: Dare to be a memory (Karnack, Nov 22 1993, 28)
Poe,
What an excelent poem. The premise behind it was great (I know casue that is how I live.... The use of ...dare to be a memory... in a repeated form
was also very effective, however, I think that I might have used a capitol 'D'
instead of a lower case, to imphasize the fact that it takes more than a want
to be a memory for someone, you have to make it happen. Great poem, like
you always do.
-Brother Karnack (Matt)
The board contains 21 notes:
- Poetry (Karnack, Oct 24 1992, 28)
- Father Michael (Saint, Nov 16 1992, 22)
- To Live Is To Die (Jhudsui, Dec 8 1992, 28)
- Insomniac Heart (Poe, Apr 2 1993, 46)
- Dust Bunny & Lint (Poe, Apr 2 1993, 46)
- Instrument of Love (Poe, Apr 2 1993, 46)
- Nightmare About a Dream (Poe, Apr 2 1993, 46)
- On Urban Life And Death. (Karnack, Apr 2 1993, 28)
- Loves Confusions (Karnack, Apr 2 1993, 28)
- Heaven Can Wait (Katsumi, Apr 14 1993, 30)
- I've lost the voice (Poe, Jul 5 1993, 46)
- Romantic Sunsets (Monarch, Sep 29 1993, 24)
- a vision called desire (Ladystardust, Oct 11 1993, 25)
- Too many friends lost. (Karnack, Oct 25 1993, 28)
- An Update (Karnack, Nov 15 1993, 28)
- Blueprint of Joy (Ladystardust, Nov 15 1993, 25)
- Dare to be a memory (Poe, Nov 21 1993, 48)
- Re: Dare to be a memory (Karnack, Nov 22 1993, 28)
- farewell freind (Karnack, Jan 12 1994, 28)
- Under the Dark Forever (Poe, Jun 12 2002, 50)
- Life's Lessons Learned (Poe, Jun 12 2002, 50)
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